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Poetry Goodbye - by Micu Ileana Oana
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Poetry Metempsychosis - by Cristina Dascalescu Dordea
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Poetry Shell under nightingale’s song - by Andreea Maresi
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Essay Process of Being. Involution and Evolution - by Andreea Maresi
Poetry - by Ana Hunedoara
Poetry i'm with you - by Anatolie Melnicov
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Poetry Time - by galileo galilei
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Poetry Lonesome - by Sârb Olimpia
Poetry Number five - by Mihai Cătălin
Poetry Quiet - by Oana Alina Iosif
Poetry My reason - by Andrei Tudora
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Poetry To Summarize II - by Ina Kins
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Poetry My dream - by radulescu cristina
Poetry Moments - by radulescu cristina
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Poetry A - by Mihai Nedelcu
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Poetry Faithful Woman - by Sârb Olimpia
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Poetry A dream train journey - by Corina Constantinescu
Poetry Longing - by Corina Constantinescu
Poetry The fool - by Corina Constantinescu
Poetry Through the crystal eye - by Corina Constantinescu
Poetry Song for me - by Suruniuc Ana Maria
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Poetry You tell me - by Oana Alina Iosif
Poetry Once ! - by Kovacs Alexandra
Poetry 100.000.000 things I love and hate - by Deniz Aktas
Poetry Go! Stay !Go ! Stay - by Kovacs Alexandra
Poetry Lullaby - by Măruşteri Marius
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Personals something - by radulescu cristina
Poetry you - by radulescu cristina
Personals I wish upon a star to change my ways - by Cătărău Alina - Andreea
Poetry Milky way - by Stocheciu Iulian Gabriel
Poetry A little control - by Stocheciu Iulian Gabriel
Poetry The echo... - by Mihai
Poetry The echo... - by Mihai
Personals symbol of truth - by Givemore Manyengawana
Personals alone in my mind - by Mitocariu Irina
Personals When roses die - by Cătărău Alina - Andreea
Poetry - by Lara Biuts
Poetry - by Lara Biuts
Personals Hemisphere - by Iurcencu Teodora Ioana
Poetry - by Lara Biuts
Poetry City - by slavchyk
Poetry You are in I am - by Daniela Mihalciac
Poetry Snowflake - by Cezar C. Viziniuck
Poetry This is how we generally communicate - by George Mihaila
Poetry House of spiders - by Florentina Laic
Poetry Caution - by Cristina Toropu
Personals Seagulls - by Iurcencu Teodora Ioana
Personals For M.y love - by Apostol Andreea
Poetry Obsession - by Dr. Ram Mehta
Personals We are different - by Pomana Sorin
Poetry Amy Ann - by Dr. Ram Mehta
Poetry Alchemy love gods - by Dr. Ram Mehta
Personals Take control of your mind - by Horatiu Pusca
Poetry A thirst for roses - by Dr. Ram Mehta
Poetry Antithesis - by Cătărău Alina - Andreea
Poetry Alone - by Florentina Laic
Personals Midnight dream - by Cătărău Alina - Andreea
Poetry I fell for Jesus - by Ujog Marius
Poetry A Preamble - by Dr. Ram Mehta
Poetry When love needs no words - by andra picincu
Poetry A Pinched honour - by Dr. Ram Mehta
Personals An old-fashioned fantasy - by Cătărău Alina - Andreea
Poetry why? - by elisav bucur
Poetry A mother’s advice - by Dr. Ram Mehta
Poetry A winter dream - by Mircea Ruse
Poetry The Cold Winter's bliss - by Mircea Ruse
Poetry A Cyber shepherd to his beloved - by Dr. Ram Mehta
Personals The nightmare - by petrusca stefan
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Poetry My time with you - by David Greer
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Personals Fighting with myself and with the others - by Cătărău Alina - Andreea
Poetry rainy days with you - by David Greer
Poetry Blizzard of my love - by David Greer
Poetry Universe - by Pop Crina Corina
Poetry Three feelings - by Cezar C. Viziniuck
Poetry I reading in your eyes - by Cezar C. Viziniuck
Poetry Lost... - by Cezar C. Viziniuck
Poetry Summer - by Alexandru Demidenco
Personals Mystical love poem - by Cătărău Alina - Andreea
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Poetry No matter - by Gherman Alexandra
Poetry Love me, my Lord - by Florentina Laic
Poetry Sweet Curse - by Daniel Timofei
Poetry How would it be… - by Cornel Borina
Poetry Judgment - by Florentina Laic
Personals Socializing... - by Cătărău Alina - Andreea
Poetry Dreaming with one eye open - by Monel Lucian
Poetry Nothing - by Florentina Laic
Poetry Perfect Summer - by Alexandru Demidenco
Poetry Time - by Cătărău Alina - Andreea
Poetry About my classmates - by Cătărău Alina - Andreea
Poetry The Apocalypse (1995) - by Ana Leibovici Hutanu
Poetry Stopping the time - by akKe
Poetry Dreamer - by Cătărău Alina - Andreea
Poetry my solitary heart - by akKe
Poetry If my dream a reality would be - by akKe
Poetry - by Andra Roman
Poetry Ioana's path - by Mihaela Roxana Boboc
Poetry The pendullum - by Adela Vasiloi
Poetry Burning Feet - by Marius S Motohon
Poetry Love is placebo - by stanca potra
Poetry Gipsy danse - by Adela Vasiloi
Poetry It's autumn - by Radu Campian
Poetry Losing you - by Tomescu Catalin Sorin
Poetry Swear - by Delivasile Daniel
Poetry Tango - by Ianus George
Poetry Primavara - by Ianus George
Poetry Thoughts - by Ianus George
Personals thoughts - by nicoleta goia
Poetry Let's play that Game - by Tuuliki Vaisanen
Poetry Welcom to the EU - by Tuuliki Vaisanen
Poetry Blue star - by Wavetrex Infinity
Poetry A World Within It’s Self - by David Greer
Poetry the social self-defense - by Ney Z. T. Row
Poetry don 't pass it - by Pomana Sorin
Poetry Poetry - by nicoleta goia
Poetry poetry - by nicoleta goia
Poetry Used to be - by larisa oarga
Poetry Why ? Because... - by Andrei Tudora
Poetry Forget or forgive - by Andrei Tudora
Poetry insecticide - by Sabau Ioana
Poetry In your eyes I see the truth - by elena serman
Poetry Black - by Mihai Nedelcu
Poetry I would send you a flower, my dear - by Dumitru Andrei
Poetry Counting the time - by Mihaela Roxana Boboc
Personals thoughts - by nicoleta goia
Poetry Hope - by elena serman
Poetry FOR YOU - by fufezescu bogdana crina
Poetry A friend in Christ - by Mocanu Adrian
Poetry raining puzzle - by Rusu Ilie - Cristian
Poetry nature - by nicoleta trifan
Poetry An invisible and great tree - by nicoleta trifan
Poetry I lost THE WORDS... - by nicoleta trifan
Poetry - by Mocanu Adrian
Poetry From birth towards birth - by Mocanu Adrian
Poetry Mags - by Ianus George
Poetry For Just A Little Longer - by Pop Denis Roger
Poetry ***** - by ion corina
Poetry Sentinels - by Ianus George
Personals thoughts - by nicoleta goia
Poetry Grim Shreds - by Mihai Nedelcu
Poetry we are people, we like candy - by Nicu Druta
Poetry I feel lonely - by nicoleta goia
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Poetry BEFORE - by raluca
Poetry What was it? - by raluca
Poetry Up and down in the dark - by Sholly
Poetry Divinity of art - by Caciuc Eduard Adrian
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Poetry Goodbye and hello - by Pomana Sorin
Poetry Prometheus numb - by Valentin Iulian Andronache
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Personals Simply dancer - by Doru Lascarache
Personals Maybe... - by Bezem Ana- Maria
Poetry What Does Goodbye Mean? - by Marius S Motohon
Poetry Emergency Room - by Cristina Toropu
Poetry Virtual Reality - by Skin Blues


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a few comments / mazHur
a few comments... http://www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?t=55465
on "Why’s and What’s", Poetry by mazHur

welcome new member / Veronica Valeanu
it is the same idea no matter if you insert comparisons or overuse repetitions - we, will, same- or
on "Metempsychosis", Poetry by Cristina Dascalescu Dordea

To Corina Gina Papouis / Andreea Maresi
Thanks for your advices. I will take care more with these aspects, especially with the rhythm of poe
on "Shell under nightingale’s song", Poetry by Andreea Maresi

A typo / Luminita Suse
Lieing ?
on "Change chapter", Poetry by Andrei Tudora

< comments >  / Veronica Valeanu
not exactly a translation
on "Shiny daffodils", Poetry by Iustina Daniela Cucu

First- / John Willy Kopperud
-you need something before "leaf", namely "a" or "the." Second; I can't make sense of the lin
on "I did not say for long", Poetry by Elena Zerfus

is... / Corina Gina Papouis
I surprise myself and my todays are leaking. liked the idea of 'thought in thought'...
on "I did not say for long", Poetry by Elena Zerfus

Andreea! / Corina Gina Papouis
.. try and be consistent with the rhyme and the rhythm of your poem, otherwise it sounds like a brok
on "Shell under nightingale’s song", Poetry by Andreea Maresi

< comments >  / Cătărău Alina - Andreea
It's not so suggestive or something doesn't sound good? At least, the structure is correct. Thank
on "Friendship haiku", Poetry by Cătărău Alina - Andreea

< comments >  / Veronica Valeanu
there are no typos or mistakes here however smth is not quite all right: you've made a hurly-burly
on "Scar tissues", Poetry by nica ioana

Because of poetry... / Andreea Maresi
I really like this kind of poetry...I remembered of a special sensible person reading it. I let expe
on "Because of you", Poetry by Dulau Florin

A sad tale / Cătărău Alina - Andreea
that ends although you wanted it to be endless. I liked very much the manner in which you have writt
on "Story", Poetry by Andreea Popovici

< comments >  / Veronica Valeanu
that's not exactly a poem -perhaps some nostalgic thoughts. you could have made it look like an ex
on "Breaking waves", Poetry by nica ioana

< comments >  / Veronica Valeanu
[impermanent beauty]seems not such a fortunate choice of words [incomprehensible red] - creates con
on "Quiet", Poetry by Oana Alina Iosif

welcome new member / Veronica Valeanu
you wanted the text to be minimal, but this diminishes its power to convince or convey thrills. it
on "Androgin", Personals by bradu andreea

I strongly agree with you / Cătărău Alina - Andreea
I like this text, is a sincere page of a journal, I suppose, or at least of a virtual one. It hurts
on "Feeling alone", Personals by Mitocariu Irina

to Mitocariu Irina / Cătărău Alina - Andreea
Thank you, Irina, for your kind words. I'm glad that you liked my poem. Thanks also for the advice.
on "Dreamer", Poetry by Cătărău Alina - Andreea

< comments >  / Corina Gina Papouis
this reminds me of a song by Enrique Iglesias...however, the text needs a good re-think: do you want
on "Sweety, lovely ping-pong", Poetry by dorin bregu

fallen / Veronica Valeanu
what might be detrimental here is exactly the choice of rhymes, much too simplistic ones. thus, ther
on "The fallen soldier", Poetry by Ianus George

< comments >  / Veronica Valeanu
some mistakes but also some parts that could work as thoughts, not as part of a poem. VV
on "Sweety, lovely ping-pong", Poetry by dorin bregu

PS: I hate surprises! / Mitocariu Irina
Hi, thank you for your post...I'm happy to see I'm not alone!Thanks and good luck to you, too!
on "alone in my mind", Personals by Mitocariu Irina

Cheers! / Mitocariu Irina
Hi Alina. I read your poem and I was impressed! You are a very talented girl and I respect the way y
on "Dreamer", Poetry by Cătărău Alina - Andreea

maybe... someday / Dely Cristian Marian
how will we describe the sun if we cannot get near it? we may, also, say that happiness could be bo
on "Maybe...", Personals by Bezem Ana- Maria

Response to Veronica's comments / Corina Constantinescu
Thank you Veronica for your comments. I don't pretend I am a poet, but sometimes I have these thoug
on "The fool", Poetry by Corina Constantinescu

< comments >  / Veronica Valeanu
gazer seems not quite a good choice
on "Faithful Woman", Poetry by Sârb Olimpia

< comments >  / Veronica Valeanu
the images convey beautiful settings, but the means of language are not so well-rendered. there is a
on "A dream train journey", Poetry by Corina Constantinescu

< comments >  / Veronica Valeanu
anchored rather in chains of thought and immediate reality, still far from poetry territories. a gl
on "Longing", Poetry by Corina Constantinescu

< comments >  / Veronica Valeanu
poetic meaning shouldn't be envisaged in a forceful way (a much too melodramatic choice of terms, i
on "The fool", Poetry by Corina Constantinescu

< comments >  / Veronica Valeanu
Loredana welcome on Agonia! rhyme is at stake here but rhyme is the one that makes everything ri
on "Feelings", Poetry by Loredana Boboc

C.C. / Veronica Valeanu
See through the crystal eye - [see] is too redundant. try another vb. The sweet soft mist beyond th
on "Through the crystal eye", Poetry by Corina Constantinescu

< comments >  / Claudiu GURGUTA
you need more work on the second stanza and the last one doesn't have your previous fluency found i
on "You tell me", Poetry by Oana Alina Iosif

< comments >  / Corina Gina Papouis
there are some grammar errors and typos in your text... sorry, I stooped counting them, so...could
on "bloggerr", Personals by Lesenciuc Teodor

< comments >  / Veronica Valeanu
there are errors to take care of plus, you followed only a single logical chain of ideas around the
on "Lostness", Poetry by Elena Zerfus

< comments >  / Veronica Valeanu
still needing consistent improvements to become a poem.
on "You tell me", Poetry by Oana Alina Iosif

< comments >  / Veronica Valeanu
Deniz, i hope you don't mind but it looks like you are learning/teaching how to count.
on "100.000.000 things I love and hate", Poetry by Deniz Aktas

< comments >  / Veronica Valeanu
who's but also too many cliches for a poem the exclamations turn it into blatant sentences
on "Go! Stay !Go ! Stay", Poetry by Kovacs Alexandra

< comments >  / Marius Surleac
there's a "won't" and a "were" and a "can't". Also, the poetics are just in the first st
on "Go! Stay !Go ! Stay", Poetry by Kovacs Alexandra

My sincere opinion... / Cătărău Alina - Andreea
I hope that I'm not hurting your feelings, but your poem gave the sensation that it's simplistic.
on "you", Poetry by radulescu cristina

< comments >  / Veronica Valeanu
Cristina, it is recommended for you to read more, analyse what you read in terms of poetic message,
on "is it a beautiful thing?", Poetry by radulescu cristina

I hope that you will like it / radulescu cristina
it was my first poem
on "you", Poetry by radulescu cristina

I hope that you will like it / radulescu cristina
Please, tell me what you think about it
on "is it a beautiful thing?", Poetry by radulescu cristina

i understand... / Corina Gina Papouis
that feelings get in the way of life and we write about them...all the time...I think it would be go
on "something", Personals by radulescu cristina

I hope that you will like it / radulescu cristina
I wrote it cause I was so unhappy and I hoped that somebody will read it and will understand what I
on "something", Personals by radulescu cristina

I'm also aware of my own limitations :) / Cătărău Alina - Andreea
Thank you very much for the comment. I know that it doesn't flows and I had some doubts if I should
on "I wish upon a star to change my ways", Personals by Cătărău Alina - Andreea

alina / Corina Gina Papouis
it takes a bit more to elevate this text to literature, they are pure thoughts, as you also stated a
on "I wish upon a star to change my ways", Personals by Cătărău Alina - Andreea

It's true:) / Cătărău Alina - Andreea
I read your poem and I must admit that I feel the same. Who doesn't want a friend like that or even
on "alone in my mind", Personals by Mitocariu Irina

to Corina Gina Papouis / Cătărău Alina - Andreea
Thank you for the advice. I'll think of it. Regards Alina
on "When roses die", Personals by Cătărău Alina - Andreea

hmm... / Corina Gina Papouis
it starts ok, but towards the end is becoming too crowded with the word 'soul', the mystery gone,
on "A little control", Poetry by Stocheciu Iulian Gabriel

< comments >  / slavchyk
relevant to our time
on "The echo...", Poetry by Mihai

< comments >  / Corina Gina Papouis
please use a spell checker prior to posting texts. thank you!
on "symbol of truth", Personals by Givemore Manyengawana


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